Author Topic: Mario Fan-fic! (Read 5770 times)

IceFox · « **on:** August 26, 2004, 03:05:06 pm »

OK, i made this and posted this on the Mario Land (Im Super_Mario_King over there). So now, im gonna post it here. OK. So here it is:

MARIO ON THE ISLAND OF LUXARY! PART ONE
Mario was getting bored one day, so he decided to go on vacation. He went to his secret room, and pulled out brocheres. He saw one for the Island of Luxary, and decided to go. He invited Yoshi, and they got on the plane. When they arrived Yoshi was exausted, so he went right to sleep. Mario, on the other hand, decided to relax in a nice hamoc, sippind ice cold lemonade. Yoshi slept and slept for days. Mario, was still sipping his lemonade...
WILL MARIO EVER FINISH HIS LEMONADE, WILL YOSHI EVER WAKE UP? KEEP READING AND FIND OUT IN: MARIO ON THE ISLAND OF LUXARY: PART TWO.
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Well, do you like it so far? Let me know if you want me to post part 2. Trust me, as this story progresses, it gets better.

ssj4gogita4 · « **Reply #1 on:** August 26, 2004, 03:14:39 pm »

You need to close your codes

edso · « **Reply #2 on:** August 26, 2004, 03:15:13 pm »

I like it.......ALOT!
I plan on making one too..........

IceFox · « **Reply #3 on:** August 26, 2004, 03:27:38 pm »

Thanks. I know, this is when i did not know how to close my codes. I just wanted to post this fast. I will start to edit it and close my codes.

Patrick · « **Reply #4 on:** August 26, 2004, 03:37:39 pm »

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OK, i made this and posted this on the Mario Land (Im Super_Mario_King over there). So now, im gonna post it here. OK. So here it is:

MARIO ON THE ISLAND OF LUXARY! PART ONE
Mario was getting bored one day, so he decided to go on vacation. He went to his secret room, and pulled out brocheres. He saw one for the Island of Luxary, and decided to go. He invited Yoshi, and they got on the plane. When they arrived Yoshi was exausted, so he went right to sleep. Mario, on the other hand, decided to relax in a nice hamoc, sippind ice cold lemonade. Yoshi slept and slept for days. Mario, was still sipping his lemonade...
WILL MARIO EVER FINISH HIS LEMONADE, WILL YOSHI EVER WAKE UP? KEEP READING AND FIND OUT IN: MARIO ON THE ISLAND OF LUXARY: PART TWO.
__________________________
Well, do you like it so far? Let me know if you want me to post part 2. Trust me, as this story progresses, it gets better.

How long did that take you, 10 seconds?

ssj4gogita4 · « **Reply #5 on:** August 26, 2004, 03:38:48 pm »

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OK, i made this and posted this on the Mario Land (Im Super_Mario_King over there). So now, im gonna post it here. OK. So here it is:

MARIO ON THE ISLAND OF LUXARY! PART ONE
Mario was getting bored one day, so he decided to go on vacation. He went to his secret room, and pulled out brocheres. He saw one for the Island of Luxary, and decided to go. He invited Yoshi, and they got on the plane. When they arrived Yoshi was exausted, so he went right to sleep. Mario, on the other hand, decided to relax in a nice hamoc, sippind ice cold lemonade. Yoshi slept and slept for days. Mario, was still sipping his lemonade...
WILL MARIO EVER FINISH HIS LEMONADE, WILL YOSHI EVER WAKE UP? KEEP READING AND FIND OUT IN: MARIO ON THE ISLAND OF LUXARY: PART TWO.
__________________________
Well, do you like it so far? Let me know if you want me to post part 2. Trust me, as this story progresses, it gets better.
How long did that take you, 10 seconds?

It doesnt take 10 seconds to post that...use your head for once

Daniel · « **Reply #6 on:** August 26, 2004, 06:15:12 pm »

I like it!

Patrick · « **Reply #7 on:** August 26, 2004, 06:33:29 pm »

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OK, i made this and posted this on the Mario Land (Im Super_Mario_King over there). So now, im gonna post it here. OK. So here it is:

MARIO ON THE ISLAND OF LUXARY! PART ONE
Mario was getting bored one day, so he decided to go on vacation. He went to his secret room, and pulled out brocheres. He saw one for the Island of Luxary, and decided to go. He invited Yoshi, and they got on the plane. When they arrived Yoshi was exausted, so he went right to sleep. Mario, on the other hand, decided to relax in a nice hamoc, sippind ice cold lemonade. Yoshi slept and slept for days. Mario, was still sipping his lemonade...
WILL MARIO EVER FINISH HIS LEMONADE, WILL YOSHI EVER WAKE UP? KEEP READING AND FIND OUT IN: MARIO ON THE ISLAND OF LUXARY: PART TWO.
__________________________
Well, do you like it so far? Let me know if you want me to post part 2. Trust me, as this story progresses, it gets better.
How long did that take you, 10 seconds?
It doesnt take 10 seconds to post that...use your head for once

Ugh, I hate dealing with people like you. I didn't literally mean 10 seconds. I said that becaues it was very short, bad story and not funny.

Starr2k3 · « **Reply #8 on:** August 26, 2004, 07:59:00 pm »

Yeah... I did not like it at all.

ssj4gogita4 · « **Reply #9 on:** August 26, 2004, 08:41:48 pm »

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OK, i made this and posted this on the Mario Land (Im Super_Mario_King over there). So now, im gonna post it here. OK. So here it is:

MARIO ON THE ISLAND OF LUXARY! PART ONE
Mario was getting bored one day, so he decided to go on vacation. He went to his secret room, and pulled out brocheres. He saw one for the Island of Luxary, and decided to go. He invited Yoshi, and they got on the plane. When they arrived Yoshi was exausted, so he went right to sleep. Mario, on the other hand, decided to relax in a nice hamoc, sippind ice cold lemonade. Yoshi slept and slept for days. Mario, was still sipping his lemonade...
WILL MARIO EVER FINISH HIS LEMONADE, WILL YOSHI EVER WAKE UP? KEEP READING AND FIND OUT IN: MARIO ON THE ISLAND OF LUXARY: PART TWO.
__________________________
Well, do you like it so far? Let me know if you want me to post part 2. Trust me, as this story progresses, it gets better.
How long did that take you, 10 seconds?
It doesnt take 10 seconds to post that...use your head for once
Ugh, I hate dealing with people like you. I didn't literally mean 10 seconds. I said that becaues it was very short, bad story and not funny.

Maybe you should put in an actual guess

IceFox · « **Reply #10 on:** August 27, 2004, 10:34:54 am »

Ok, i know you guys are starting to hate this, but as it gets further along the codes close, the story gets longer,and it gets funnier and better. This was the first time I ever made a fan-fic that was NOT in script form, so it might be confusing to read.
Anyways, here it is PART 2:

MARIO ON THE ISLAND OF LUXARY!
PART TWO
We last left Mario sipping lemonade, and Yoshi was sleeping.
ALL of a sudden disaster struck...at least for Mario. This once pieceful island, was now...
SWARMING WITH TOURISTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mario thought, What to do, what to do?
Then his homoc spun around in a twist.
Tourists came crashing by, but Yoshi was able to sleep through it all.
Mario, decided to scare evreyone off, so he could relax in peace.
He put on a costume, and at night durring a big loud party, held by tourists, Mario went up and tiried to scare them. They all started laughing. Mario went to sleep. The next morning he sat trying to think of a way to get them to leave. Then he got an idea.....
TO BE CONTENUED.....

Ok, I thought this was longer but it wasn't really. Part 3 is pretty good. The Finale and Part 5 are best in my opinion. So, what do you think?

ssj4gogita4 · « **Reply #11 on:** August 27, 2004, 12:08:53 pm »

What the heck is a homoc?

Squiddy · « **Reply #12 on:** August 27, 2004, 05:29:24 pm »

I have never seen a Mario FanFic before....kewl!

IceFox · « **Reply #13 on:** August 27, 2004, 06:24:12 pm »

I meant hamac, not hamoc.

Squid's Bro · « **Reply #14 on:** August 27, 2004, 09:55:52 pm »

hurry and post the rest.....it's so suspensful.

spongey675 · « **Reply #15 on:** August 28, 2004, 04:36:08 am »

Very bad so far

Squid's Bro · « **Reply #16 on:** August 28, 2004, 02:11:33 pm »

i disagree...but that's just me

Patricksquare Pants · « **Reply #17 on:** August 28, 2004, 02:15:17 pm »

That Was Boring.

:sick:

IceFox · « **Reply #18 on:** September 03, 2004, 05:47:04 pm »

OK, well sorry you feel that way, but it gets better. Right now, ML is down, so I CANNOT copy and paste th3e next part, but when it is up and running (I exepct tommorow) I will psoy the next part. It doews get a bit suspensful i the last two parts.

Squid's Bro · « **Reply #19 on:** September 06, 2004, 09:06:48 am »

i can't wait

spongey675 · « **Reply #20 on:** September 06, 2004, 09:21:34 am »

i can

IceFox · « **Reply #21 on:** October 03, 2004, 09:47:27 pm »

OK, for those of you like it, here's part three and four in a combo:

MARIO ON THE ISLAND OF LUXARY!
PART THREE[/size]

Previously: Mario was getting sick of all the tourists and he finnaly came up with idea: (PART THREE NOW BEGINS...)

Mario quickly got on the phone, and called his enemy...BOWSER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bowser agreed to help Mario. Bowser came and one night he tried to scare off the tourists. All the tourists laughed. The next day, he dressed up as ghost, and the tourists laughed. Finnaly, Bowser pulled out his 500000000000000 shooter laser, and all of the tourists laughed. Bowser then left the island. Mario was waiting to think of something, but then after one week all the tourists were gone, and Mario was relaxing again. Then, the next day more Tourists came, and after three weeks they were still there. Then, Mario thought: What was Yoshi doing before we left...he is still asleep. Then Mario decided it was Okay that tourists were here because these tourists were quiet, very quiet. But then, all of a sudden...

MARIO ON THE ISLAND OF LUXARY!
PART FOUR[/size]

We last left Mario, relaxing when all of a sudden...(PART FOUR BEGINS)

A Huge...

HURRUICANE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Flops through the island scaring all the Tourists off. Then the huuricane stopped, and Bowser walked a shore carring thr ULTRA WIND 30000000000000000000000000000000. Then Bowser left. Mario laughed, and he finnaly finished his lemonade. He decided to go up the big giant mountain for a hike. Mario startred walking up, and he fell off a litte cliff, and fell to the ground!!!!
Luckily, he just his hike, and he was ONLY 20 centimeters above the ground!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mario climbed back up and contenued hikeing, an hour later back down. He went to sleep, and the next morning woke up, took a shower, and checked to see if Yoshi was still alive. "YEP, He's a live", said Mario. He walked around and found a dark old cave. He walked in perfectly clean, and came out 10 seconds later, with a ripped up shirt, a few scratches, and a pair of ripped pants. He went back to the place they were staying at. Then... More Party Tourists!!!!!!!!!!!! Mario was thinking up a plan to get rid of them.

TO BE CONTENUED...
Hope you liked this so far. Bye. Part Five coming soon for those of you reading at SZ. For people at ML, Part Five is already here.

Hope You Like It!!! Like I said Part Five through Finale are best.

spongey675 · « **Reply #22 on:** October 04, 2004, 04:51:58 am »

ugh your 1st bad fanfic but I think you've already found that out from me

GIR · « **Reply #23 on:** October 07, 2004, 05:12:00 pm »

pretty sucky but i couldent make a better mario fan-fic

Rabble · « **Reply #24 on:** October 07, 2004, 05:58:13 pm »

Make A more Exiteing story and many crazy Twist

4/10

IceFox · « **Reply #25 on:** October 10, 2004, 01:53:20 pm »

Well, lucky for you, I can't ever finish this. As you may know, ML is gone, and all psots wiull be gione when it comes back, so i wil not be able to post more. Also, I hade spent over 4 hours making a fan-fic there, and now it will be gone. 4 hours!!!!

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Author Topic: Mario Fan-fic! (Read 5770 times)

edso

Patrick

Patrick

Starr2k3

Squid's Bro

spongey675

Squid's Bro

Patricksquare Pants

Squid's Bro

spongey675

spongey675

GIR

Rabble