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« Reply #30 on: July 03, 2005, 01:38:17 pm »
Thank you. I just want to tell you guys that I'm going to probably continue my fan fiction in devian art but I'll still be here posting things saying like I'm done with Chapter so and so, and I9'll have the picture above the script and you guys can rate the Chapter here on Spongezone.

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« Reply #31 on: July 03, 2005, 02:25:12 pm »
Sorry for double posting but I just updatded Chapter 6 on Devon art. So here's the link to get there.
« Last Edit: August 19, 2005, 01:10:32 pm by weird_4 »

lil_angel911

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« Reply #32 on: July 03, 2005, 02:30:04 pm »
lmao

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« Reply #33 on: July 11, 2005, 03:56:43 pm »
I just want to tell you guys that I'm leaving to Florida tomorrow and I think Pat12q will take over for me.

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« Reply #34 on: July 12, 2005, 09:28:21 am »
yo, whazzup, dawgs?this pat12q filling in for weird_4.

chapter 7:the comeback


spongebob(enters house):plankton...


plankton:spongebob...

spongebob:you won't get away with this, plankton!

plankton:i will!(opens up a curtain, revealing giant super krabby patty shooter)oh, i will!

spongebob:ya!(starts shooting plankton)

plankton:yaaaa!!!(krabby pattys come out more faster than spongebob)

spongebob:nooo!!(guns get destroyed)ahhhh!!(plankton shoots krabby pattys at spongebob, spongebob does the matrix)

plankton:darn, the matrix!oh, well, i still have my giant cousin, and MY ROBOT ARMY!!!!(robots from battle for bikini bottem come back to life and surround spongebob)

spongebob:not them again!

plankton:impressed?don't worry, they won't kill you.

spongebob:*phew*

plankton:they'll torture you for 2 years, THEN kill you!

spongebob:nooo!!!(robots close in)

plankton:luckily, i can stick around and watch the show!muhahahahahahahahaaa!

spongebob(starts getting angry,)

plankton:what the heck?

spongebob(still getting angry, turns into the hulk, only yellow)aaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrggggghhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

plankton:uhh, spongebob?

spongehulk(starts destroying robots):spongehulk smash!rrroooaaarrr!!!(starts destroying all the robots)

plankton:i'd better get out of here...

spongehulk:no, you no go anywhere!(smooshes plankton 1000000 times)

plankton:wow!karen was right!(gets stepped on)ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!

spongehulk:now to stop giant cuz!roooooaaaaaaaaaaaaar!!!!!!(starts running towards giant cousin)roaaaaaaaaar!!!!!!!!!(turns back to spongebob)roar?

plankton's cuz:hahhahahahahahahahahhaa!

spongebob:i must defeat him in godzilla mode!

mr.krabs:argh,whats with this boy, spoofin' movies

spongebob:time to get...uh...old movie style(the screen turns black and white)thats better!
« Last Edit: July 12, 2005, 09:29:43 am by patrick12q »

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« Reply #35 on: July 13, 2005, 04:09:49 pm »
chapter 8:spongebob, the warrior!

spongebob:we must stop him!

sandy:well, i got a plan!(throws a rope on the giant plankton)yeehaw!(spins the giannt plankton around and around)

planktons cuz:duhhh(is dizzy)er, whhheeeeeee!!!!

plankton(gets up):what happend?(see's that his giant cuz is about to fall on him)holy fish-(gets smooshed by giant cuz)ow!

spongebob:Wow!thatnks sandy!but, i was thinking of spoofing godzilla.

sandy:you've done enough spoofing for today, now, lets go home!

spongebob:ok!(they don't relize that planktons giant cuz gets up)

sandy:once we get home, want to have a karate contest?

spongebob:you mean kah-rah(giant cuz grabs sandy)ahhhhhh!!!!

planktons giant cuz:hahahahaha!(sandy strugles to get out of his grip)

sandy:spongebob!help me!

spongebob(runs around in circles):ahhh!sandy!what should i do?what?what?whaaat?ahhhh!someone help me!help me!heeelllp meee!!!!i know!i'll spoof king kong!yaaay!!!!

(planktons cuz climbs on the needle tower)

sandy:spongebob!

spongebob(in a helicopter):don't worry sandy!i'll save you!

sandy:but how'd ya' all get the helicopter?

spongebob(stares, heicopter disappears, starts falling):aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!

spongebob(flying up by a umbrella):maybe i should do mary poppins next!hey cuz!look at me!(shackes butt at him)

planktons giant cuz(getting angry):errrr!!!(grabs for spongebob, but falls,drops sandy, but luckily spongebob catches her.spongebob kisses sandy, but forgets that shes wearing her helmet, also forgets to hold the umbrella)

spongebob and sandy and planktons cuz:aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(luckily they fall into a pile of bananas)

planktons cuz:bananas?i'm alergic to bananas!aaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!i'm melting!(melts)

spongebob:yaaaaay!!!we did it!but i got a banana stuck in my butt.

announcer:so, they lived happily ever after.the end!(cuts to a robot(from BFBB))or is it?

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« Reply #36 on: July 16, 2005, 09:40:46 am »
Better than the last, but still not that great. 7/10 I really liked the first one.

patrick12q

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« Reply #37 on: July 17, 2005, 08:10:15 am »
you'd think weird_4 would be back by now.
« Last Edit: July 17, 2005, 08:10:55 am by patrick12q »

weird_4

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« Reply #38 on: July 19, 2005, 02:43:12 pm »
Yo! I'm back. You did a great job patrick12q...... I'm going to do the next Chapter later....

patrick12q

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« Reply #39 on: July 19, 2005, 02:51:36 pm »
thanks :blush:

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« Reply #40 on: July 27, 2005, 06:01:22 pm »
Wow. It's been a long time since I've done this fic. Anyway here's Chapter 9. It might be the last Chapter. Who knows?
Chapter 9: Bad News.
Spongebob:Phew! That was a close one.
Sandy:I'll say. Plankton almost destroyed Bikini Bottom.
Plankton:Guess again squil!
Spongebob:What are you talking about?
Plankton:I'm not done destroying Bikini Bottom.
Spongebob:Do you have a plan Sandy?
Sandy:Uh........
(Plankton grows tall like his cusion)
(Plankton picks up Sandy)
Sandy:HELP ME SPONGEBOB!
(Spongebob turns into the hulk again)
Spongebob:PUT HER DOWN!
Plankton:NEVER!
Patrick:Wow! That's the biggest jelly bean ever!
Spongebob:Let her down! Or else!
Plankton:Or else what? I'm taller than you.
Spongebob:I'll have to spary you with somthing.
Plankton:Pfffffft! Yeah right!
Spongebob:Toilet water!
Plankton:What!
(Spongebob sprays Plankton with toilet water)
Plankton:*cough*This can't be happening.
(Plankton shrinks to his normal size)
Sandy:Spongebob!
Spongebob:(weakly)Hi Sandy.
Patrick:Oh boy! A jelly bean.
(Patrick eats Plankton)
Plankton:I'll be back.
Narrarator:Well it looks like this story did have a happy ending after all. Or did it?
(A taxi is driving up to Squidwards Easter Egg Island house)
Spongebob and Patrick:Squidward! Your back!
Squidward:What the heck happened?
Spongebob:Plankton destroyed your house.
Patrick:And I ate him.
Squidward:Spongebob, Do you promise that you won't annoy me anymore?
Spongebob:Sure thing buddy.
(Later that night)
(We see Patrick in his house)
Patrick:Aaaaa! Bathroom!
(Plankton comes our brown)
Plankton:Aaaaaaaa!!
The end! What did you guys think?

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« Reply #41 on: July 27, 2005, 06:04:03 pm »
it was good.10/10

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« Reply #42 on: August 10, 2005, 10:19:18 am »
Yeah...I realize it's not "old old" but its still old. I have one thing to say.

You need to get Angelene's permission BEFORE you post the pictures. I did it once without permission and she got ::Dolphin Noise::ed. You really should think before you post. You're going to get in trouble and flamed at.

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« Reply #43 on: August 10, 2005, 10:22:57 am »
I didn't know that. :sad: I hope I don't get in trouble. :sad:

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« Reply #44 on: August 12, 2005, 10:08:59 am »
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Anyway, I promise that I'll make the story more nicer and no I drew these pictures and I'm angles~dreams but with a different name for here.

do me a favor??

DIE...you lousey, lying no-talent.  :mellow: